Hay(na)ku 15 reviewed

In a recent review of Hay(na)ku 15 on Galatea Resurrects, Veronica Montes writes:

This poem, written by Ivy Alvarez, plays like a silent film. And I love the way the sound of susurrus/brushing and bamboo/roof play off of each other in the second tercet:

leaf

races me

up the hill




susurrus

of bamboo

brushing the roof